@HirokoTabuchi And while your audience (NYT readers) are most likely all part of that group of frequent flyers, you wrote it as if they're not. The reader can feel as if they're not part of the problem, b/c their flights are not "purely" a luxury.
@HirokoTabuchi And while your audience (NYT readers) are most likely all part of that group of frequent flyers, you wrote it as if they're not. The reader can feel as if they're not part of the problem, b/c their flights are not "purely" a luxury.